The feedback I received on my last pitch was that I included a lot of relevant information, gave good analogies that students could relate to, and that I have good speaking skills. However, I also received feedback that I could be in professional dress and standing up in order to deliver a better presentation. This is what I changed in my second elevator pitch in order to be more effective.
Friday, October 20, 2017
Elevator Pitch #2
This is my elevator pitch for my educational guidebooks:
The feedback I received on my last pitch was that I included a lot of relevant information, gave good analogies that students could relate to, and that I have good speaking skills. However, I also received feedback that I could be in professional dress and standing up in order to deliver a better presentation. This is what I changed in my second elevator pitch in order to be more effective.
The feedback I received on my last pitch was that I included a lot of relevant information, gave good analogies that students could relate to, and that I have good speaking skills. However, I also received feedback that I could be in professional dress and standing up in order to deliver a better presentation. This is what I changed in my second elevator pitch in order to be more effective.
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Hey Lauren,
ReplyDeleteIt was very informative to watch your elevator pitch. I think you did a great job. You implemented the suggestion to dress in a professional way very good. You spoke clearly and precisely. You emphasized especially the value of your educational guidebooks for students but also for the teachers and professors. The only suggestions I have for you is that it might be better to do the pitch during the day time because it will be brighter in the room and will appear friendlier to the customer.
if you made that just for the video - you win! Infographics can really be a fun way to digest and retain content. Sometimes they are also lost in the beautiful design so it is a delicate balance. I see that you are truly interested and pull me into the "need". Having a 10 min presentation lik this would probably give me enough to decide to invest or to pass. I think i would invest though great job.
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